~KRISTIN ABRAHAM~
KATE
NORTHROP: THINGS ARE
DISAPPEARING HERE
. . . there is an
implicit narrative arc
throughout the book, a story these poems
combine
to tell about lost love, absence,
memory of a life together, and the
way
those memories can disappear with time.
Kate Northrop’s first book of poetry Back through Interruption, was
described by Lyn Emmanuel as having “been born under the sign of the
double helix . . . poems of being two: woman and man, daughter
and
mother, sister and sister.” These words aptly describe the power
of Northrop’s work and what drew me with excitement to her second
full-length book of poems. Things
Are Disappearing Here is as
much of a must-buy as her first book; however, at times it lacks some
of the emotional “shimmer” that drew me to her poetry to begin
with.
The strongest poems in the book seem to be the ones
that do what Lynn Emmanuel describes: they impress upon us the
tension in relationships. Northrop’s ability to develop that
tension is most noticeable when we feel the full force of the moment
while only getting hints of a narrative. For instance, in the
poem “Her Apology, and Lament,” we are given a few descriptions of a
relationship in passing seasons (“Early it was come for cocktails”;
“Early, in the truck & heels”; “Summers, always the clatter of
blackbirds / and pie plates”; “and once, in autumn, in the middle of
the night, / the dog gone off”). We have the implication of two
people having drinks, going on a date, possibly — he picks her up in a
truck; later, the relationship becomes more domestic with household
cooking and dog ownership. But nothing “notable” ever seems to
happen. Then, the speaker pauses a moment to address the “you”
(presumably, the other person in the previously described relationship):
Nights into years, and then
what? This?
You tell me
Go on
In the face of the faded garden,
the cold singe of the lake,
in the wrecked arrangement of
what
had been a deer,
then what? Nothing?
We sense indignation here, possibly a feeling of betrayal, though there
is no clear reason why this would be so (beyond the speaker’s tone and
a vague, non-referential “this”). But the strong voice and
emotional resonance mixed with such telling adjectives as “faded,”
“cold,” and “wrecked” is what holds the poem together where the
narrative disappears; it is enough to feel the loss and the hurt to get
the lyric intensity of the poem.
Other poems explore emotion via relationships in
similar ways. A few poems continue with the “I”/ “you” pattern and
these poems stand out starkly from the rest of the book in terms of
emotional “vividness”:
Wherever I go, I bring evening.
I am the sorrow of flowers that open at twilight,
sorrow of doorways and bottles,
of cats that disappear in the rustling hedge.
I am the face you saw once by the lamp in the window,
—that which almost belonged to you
These images in the poem “Three Women” are all representative of
loneliness and emptiness, but especially distance; here, the “I” and
the “you” are literally separated by a pane of glass and we can almost
see one’s reflection cinematographically superimposed over the other as
he/she looks out from the warmth within. With these images, we
can feel the sorrow that the speaker feels, we can feel the distance.
Distance between the “I” and the “you” also appears
later in the poem — in what is in some ways a more literal reference to
the tension:
If only our story weren’t
so ordinary: first,
pain loses its cut, its perfect
specificity, then names
dissolve, even those I knew for
you
and for our locations.
But, as the above excerpt says, although we feel this pain with the
speaker, and the voice is authentic, the story isn’t new; pain isn’t
new, especially not in poetry. We already know that the poems
aren’t focusing on any clear “story,” but it is important to understand
that they also are not focusing on that somewhat “ordinary” emotional
intensity as much as they are focusing on the distance and loneliness
that create the pain.
This, we realize then, is the book’s project:
to explore the distance in relationships. Northrop writes always
with that pane of glass in the poem or with the actual couple “just
beyond the realm of the painting . . . their clothes / cast off at the
edge
of a sea,” the only sign we have that they are there at all.
Similar to the lovers who only appear by the description of their
cast-off clothes, if we read carefully, we will notice that even when
two characters are in the same poem, they are never actually “there”
together: there is the story of a countess and her murder
victims, all dead and “disposed of” far from her; a speaker in one poem
remembers someone she used to live with in an apartment; a speaker in
another poem hears a neighbor through the walls playing the
piano.
In keeping with the theme of absence, the title poem
of the book,
“Things Are Disappearing Here,” ruminates over the mysterious
disappearance of dogs and fathers: “. . . our fathers / fly off, a
whole
flotilla fills the sky, // their jackets and ties flapping // like the
pages of books the (sic) never read. Our fathers / are
disappearing yet they are not // ashamed.” In fact, “things”
aren’t disappearing; people are, dogs are; what is disappearing is the
“other” in relationships. And their absence causes the loneliness
and pain that Northrop evokes so well while rarely using such abstract
words as “loneliness” and “pain.”
What is dangerous about this project is that as
Northrop explores the
distance and absence in relationships, when she focuses too much on the
distance and absence, there is a severe lack of tension. In some
ways, this is obvious: it is difficult to create a narrative (or the
semblance of a narrative) about two people if one of them isn’t really
there; the poem, instead, must become more of a meditation on the
absence, on what the story used to be, or what the memory is (which is
why many of her poems deal with memory, and most depend on meditation
and rhetorical questions). Northrop acknowledges this predicament
in one of her meditations: “I see there is no narrative arc, no
rise, rise, rise, not even a / you, a still place // to put
things.”
When they are most successful, these poems of
absence are only about
the speaker and her meditations, rarely about the “you” or other
characters (and when they are, their awareness of distance and absence
is very clear), and rarely narrative. In other words, they stay
in line with the rest of the poems in the book. Thus, there is an
implicit narrative arc throughout the book, a story these poems combine
to tell about lost love, absence, memory of a life together, and the
way those memories can disappear with time.
But the poems fail when the relationship between the
“I” and
“you” disappears from the picture altogether; these poems don’t fit
well into the overall project, and they feel a bit emotionally “dead”
when held against the tension of the other works in the book.
These poems focus primarily on the “you,” or “they”; in other words,
there is very little implicit relationship in them because only one
character is the focus. “Aspens,” for instance, is an extended
description of pine trees and how a “you” would describe them:
You would say they are white
They are not white
Although their secret is
A private cleanliness
You would say the sound
Their leaves make is slight
It is not slight the sound
Of the leaves is the sound
Of very small stones
Rolled under the tide
A sound that’s kept you awake
On certain nights haunted
As if on a back stair
Or here at the window
Drawn again by the meadow
Thin transparent cold
These second and third-person poems stall in the act
of
description — in this case, it is of the aspens — and without a
relationship to imply tension as in the rest of the book, as readers,
we can feel emotionally removed from the poem compared to the way we
become involved with the characters in the other poems.
One could argue that there is an implied “I” in a
poem like “Aspens,”
that the speaker is in fact arguing with the “you” about the sound and
sight of the trees, and although the “I” doesn’t literally appear in
the poem as it does in other poems, it still exists. Thus it can
be said that the argument in the poem creates a relationship and
tension and we begin to see these two people (the speaker and the
“you”) as people who have a history of disagreeing, so much so that the
speaker can speak for the “you” and predict how the conversation about
the trees would develop. One can also contend that the symbolic
windowpane appears at the end of this poem, as well, to combine with
the argument in the poem and remind us of the distance/absence
relationships common throughout the book.
I don’t deny these readings; however, this poem —
and others like it — does
not compel me in the way the other poems in Things Are Disappearing
Here do. The adjectives and imagery are much less vivid
than
those in her other poems, and the speaker has a much subtler
voice. In another book by another poet, this would be a virtue,
but it is difficult to read poems such as “Things Are Disappearing
Here” and “Three Women,” which virtually give us a punch in the gut,
and then compare them to tame, forgettable poems like “Aspens.”
Northrop should have taken advice from a line in one
of her own poems
when putting together this manuscript: “Maintain, /
maintain. To appear // is to escape.” This book is all
about absence, so it would seem that poems like “Aspens” that are
missing the vividness of major “players,” so to speak, would fit into
that theme nicely; however, what I have found is that Northrop most
successfully produces feelings of absence when a person both appears
and is not there in a poem and the speaker spends a few lines,
somewhere, speaking to the absence (whether it’s through meditation or
addressing the absence). Without those things, the poem becomes
emotionally flat.
Thankfully, these “flat” poems are very few and far
between, and
although one could argue that they should probably not have made it
into the book at all, they do not ruin the reading experience and are
simple enough to skip over on subsequent reads. In all, the bulk
of Things Are Disappearing Here
has proven once again that Northrop is
an iconic poet: unique, timeless, and stunning.
Things Are Disappearing Here,
Kate Northrop. Persea, 2007. ISBN: 0892553340 $14.00
© by Kristin
Abraham
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